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Monday, October 15, 2012

I'm Back Baby! kinda...

Well, here I go. It’s been a long time since I posted something to the blog. Mostly because there hasn't been much to post. Both Cordell and I have been busy with life, work, school and the women in our lives and have struggled to find time to meet up and work on the books.

Currently I am editing The Deserted, a novella. I am in the first revision stage of the book. I have some great feedback from Cordell and Texas (my girl). The struggle is to take the feedback and incorporate it into the story. As well as going through and improving all the descriptions. There is some stuff that needs to be cut out of the story and quite a lot that needs to be added. I am currently trying to rewrite the beginning sequence to add a bit of action, something to grab the reader right from the outset. This is a difficult thing to do. Like the author Brandon Sanderson said, “Its like killing off your babies.”  The revision is coming slowly but surely.

I also have another novella waiting in the wings that I need to edit and revise as well. That is Kira, a fairy tale/adventure story. I just got a wonderful piece of feedback from Texas about how I need to make the female lead more vulnerable, so she is relatable to women. So I have been occupying my writing time trying to figure out how I want to do that. Should she be afraid of the big bad world when she steps out into it? Should she be a bit shy? Perhaps unsure of how to go about completing her quests? I’m not sure how I will tackle this problem in the end, but it is fun to think about and play with.

Over the past couple months my girl and I have been cooking some great meals while we stand around drinking wine and chatting about life. Recently we made some excellent fish tacos and drank Sapporo a Japanese beer. As I have said before my palate is terrible when it comes to describing beers now but I will say this about Sapporo. Its a light tasting beer that pairs well with a spicy meal. The Japanese beers I have tried have been surprisingly similar to Mexican beers in that regard.

Well that's it from me for now. I will endeavor to blog more regularly. At some point out fans will want to see these and its good to get in the habit.

Monday, October 8, 2012

Working away...



Despite our not having posted anything in a while, work continues. I'm entrenched in school and writing/ editing at night. Brenden has a new job and is doing the same. While we haven't crossed paths in a little while, each of us are still plugging away.

Two new projects:

1. I'm putting together a little home brew area in my garage. It will have 10-15 gallon capacity and some pretty nifty tricks.

2. I've been writing a fantasy love story. Don't worry it is as gritty and noir as everything else I write. Here is a little tinny sample:

Despair wiggled its way out of hiding and perched in the forefront of Auora’s brain for a better view of the big detective as he studied her with those big brown eyes. For an instant she could have swore the barbaric looking detective had pegged her as Blake’s sister. The ramifications of being related to the man accused of killing ten constables mentally unfolded in her mind; despair relished in the feast of noir thoughts. What would an entire police force do to the sister of a man who had killed their own? Beat her? Torture her? Murder her? Having satiated itself on these dark thoughts despair fostered a desire for company. Wantonly, despair danced down Auora’s spine and released panic, desperation, and doom into the pit of her belly. All four dire emotions churned and churned in the pit of her stomach until their dance reached its crescendo and Auora broke into tears.  

As you can see it is rough but the style is drastically differnt than what I've been working on in the ebook.

Fun Weekend:

Played Gurps in San Francisco this weekend and had an amazing time. Drank Chimay blue cap and ate Asian buns from:

Clement Restaurant Dim Sum & Bakery, 621 Clement St., 415-752-9520
Hing Lung, 674 Broadway St., 415-398-8838
Yank Sing, 101 Spear St., 415-957-9300,
yanksing.com

Saturday, September 1, 2012

Well, well, look who's back



I think I see the other side of the shit tunnel I've been crawling through. My computer is officially back, and I only lost a few irreplaceable things that would have forever changed the way the world views drugs sex and rock n roll... er... I mean fantasy, beer, and football. Nonetheless I am back.

Anatomy is eating my free time like pacman eats blurry white dots. I've got to have the skeletal system down by tuesday so I am cranking it out. Take this test:

I'll post the answer below for you! And of course what would a night of studying be with out a little something to warm the belly? So tonight I'm drinking Duvel Belgian Golden Ale. Yum...

Night thick bubbly head with a crisp apple and hops nose. Light golden color. Very traditional mouth feel and flavor, strong with a bitter back bone yet very refreshing. If you haven't had this yet it is a great way to spend an evening.


Updates since I've been gone...

I have finished editing all of Brondan's work for the upcoming ebook. Every excited about his two tales. Both are very different and interesting pieces.

I will be reading a piece of Larceny at the Bencia Outwriters writing group this thursday at Benicia Coffee house. That should be fun. I'm hoping to kidnap Brandan and force him to read too. If I can pry him away from Texas (female friend).

Julia is making some great progress on the graphic novel strip... but is leaving for france and is not going to work on it for a month or two?

Javier probably thinks I fell off the face of the world since my computer died but he is supposed to be working on maps for me but I haven't sent him the finals. Hopefully this week.

I started writing a bit of a love story and I don't think anyone is brutally raped or killed in it so I guess I've turned over a new leaf or something. Probably on account of my new girl friend... just kidding honey! My wife reads fantasy blogs all the time so I have to watch what I say!

I'm going to post the first chapter to larceny up on this site so you can read it and get a glimpse about what I've been doing. I'm normally against posting my roughs, but what the hell. Its only a short little read.

Answers to the test:

Friday, August 24, 2012

A hard days night...

I just finished a 48hr work week. Planting trees, pulling weeds and building gardens in the hot Napa sun. It actually wasn't too bad of a week. Though my whole body is sore and I have strange cuts and scrapes all over. I went and got a haircut, a cup of coffee and soon I will be sitting down to re-read an old favorite The Dragonbone Chair by Tad Williams. I will have a review up shortly (first I have to review the last series I read, Prince of Thorns... amazing!!!!!). I read this series by Williams years ago but it has faded into the dark, musty recesses of my mind, as most things tend to. So a night of reading, editing and random internweb video watching awaits me. What an exciting life I lead!

Oh did I mention what I will be drinking shortly? I bought myself a bottle of my favorite/cheapish bottle of Irish whiskey, Jameson. I prefer my scotch and whiskey's neat, in a small glass and occasionally with a water or tonic&ice chaser. I am drinking alone and reading tonight, so I won't be getting drunk (probably not). Its a damn shame. Tomorrow though is a different story. Tomorrow is date night!

Monday, August 20, 2012

Nice little punch to the gut


I got a good one today... went to starbucks to edit Kira and the barista started complaining about parking at the college. I have pretty much taken classes my whole adult life, be it wine, art, EMT, chem, ect. After I got a degree I decided I would be a student for life, and I dig the community college system in california. I digress. His lament got me a little worried since classes weren't supposed to start until Wed... or so I thought. Nope, classes started today and I missed my first and was about to miss the second. I rushed to the school and sent my teacher an email on the way, begging her not to drop me. Turns out teacher is a dude. I'm what the locals called 'screwed'

So I make my anatomy class... and spend four hours in hell listing to my teacher read from his web site and teach us how to use a microscope. Hell I tell you.

Then I go home and get a nice little Hard disk 303 error message on my laptop. Its fried like Zack Brown's Chicken. I've got shit for money in my bank account, haven't bought my school books yet, and have a over heated paper weight for a computer.

Anatomy teacher assigned us three chapters to read by wed and my wife is leaving for vegas in the morning, leaving me with the kids.

That's about half of the, as Blake would say, "Shit trencher I had to eat today"

So what do you drink on a day like this. Put the suds down my friends it is time to drink the good stuff. I ate four waffles with peanut butter on them and (after washing them down with milk) poured a glass of Blanton's Bourbon.

I'm not going to break it down, I haven't the mental capacity at this point. I will tell you that it is one of my favorite bourbons and I usually only break it out for special occasions. It makes this uber dork fan boy happier than slaying goblins on a sunday morning!

Sunday, August 19, 2012

SF GURPS... Chance the One Eyed Dog!


Played GURPS in San Francisco this week with a bunch of my long time gaming friends. I play Chance 'The Once Eyed Dog' a character who started out as a Dungeons and Dragons 4e character and transitioned into a GURPS 4th edition character.

Chance grew up in a monastery as the son of the holy leader. As an adolescence Chance rejected the evil ways of the monastery. During a heated debate Chance murdered his father and fled the monastery. Loyal followers from the monastery vowed to avenge Chance. Out matched and over numbered Chance fled to Zargous where he established himself as a vigilante. Fearing to bring the wrath of the montestary and bounty hunters on any he befriended Chance remained a loner for many painful years.

Fate proved to be a fickle bitch and Chance's desire to avenge the wrongs imposed on innocence led him to join with a posse hunting goblin raiders. Chance got on well with the members of the posse for a while; his bad temper surfaced when Chance caught the members of the party trying to steal from a crypt. Tempers flared and swords were drawn. Chance was sent out of the mausoleum that the party had chased the goblins in to protect some rescued prisoners as well as separate him from the rest of the group. It should be noted that the party did refrain from robbing the crypt in the end.

The members of the posse made quite a name for themselves after rescuing the prisoners and a prominent Lord, one Lord Avery Green of Hempfast, invited the core members of the posse to stay on with him as men at arms. With the Hempfast sigil on their shields the group gained numerous benefits not available to common folk.

Chance fully disclosed his dark history to Lord Avery, who promised to lend his garrison’s full support against the evil monks should they return. Chance felt secure for the first time since learning of his father's evil ways. Chance took on the role of law enforcement for Lord Avery and diligently monitored Hempfast night and day from the roof tops. This annoyed the common folk and proved to be a pain to lord Avery so Chance no longer is allowed on the roof tops in Hempfast.

Lord Avery has sent Chance and his new found friends on many grand and dangerous adventures. Indeed twice Chance has taken blows to the head from melee weapons. The first time left Chance with a wicked scare running from the top of his head down the side of his face to the bottom of his jaw. The hair in the scar area has turned white, and since the scar was field dressed it is a rather large and ugly scare. Chance had never been known as a ladies man, but before women just didn't notice him because he was a bit of a loner. After receiving the scar women began to shudder at the sight of him.

The second blow to the head proved to be more deadly. Chance had traveled to Marsum with Sir O, one of Lord Avery's knights who had been part of the original rescue posse. During the course of escorting a young lady friend of Sir O's the city was invaded by foul Minotaur beasts. One such beast entered the Stony Pony tavern, a tavern frequented by Sir O and many other business men. Chance threw a hand axe and struck the beast directly in the throat. The thick hide left the beast with a glimmer of life left. The beast charged Chance and clubbed him in the face with an axe. The blow sent chance to the floor and his world spun. Chance lay bleeding to death on the floor while Sir O and Tim-Tim, another of the original posse, finished the beast. Sir O saved Chance's life on the floor of the Stony Pony by invoking the healing arts of his god.

This critical blow changed Chance's life forever. First off and undying loyalty to Sir O for saving his life bloomed. While Chance has never pledged himself to Sir O, he is pledged to Lord Avery, Chance is always first to defend Sir O's honor and look out for Sir O's squire. Secondly Chance put his fencing steel down as a hobby weapon and picked up a bastard sword, some heavy armor, and a shield. Whereas Chance used to dance around flipping off of tables and throwing axes, now Chance move methodically slow through the field of battle hacking everything to pieces in a rather brutal manner.

Most recently, SF this week, Chance and his band of adventures stumbled on a tribe of barbarians in the Sea of Grass. The barbarian tribe respected Chances battle wounds, even revered them, and was awe struck by his fire eating skills. Chance drank enough for four men, and smoked until his eye stung. Lost in merriment, something he had not known since childhood, Chance blacked out with glee. In the morning chance found himself to be lying with a stunningly beautiful tribal woman. Upon stumbling out into the morning light the chief announced that Chance and Tim-Tim had married into the tribe the night before. Tim-Tim hadn't a clue what was happening. Chance looked to see if his way more beautiful wife than he deserved was happy with the marriage. She revered his scares and broad shoulders. Chance learned she was the envy of the tribe for having married such a seasoned and exotic warrior. Chance would have planted stacks and lived the rest of his life within the community were it not for his current assignment and pledge to Lord Avery.

Indeed, luck stayed with Chance's side yet again for as chance and his new wife began to set up camp one night after five nights of travel, distant war fires signaled the tribe had been besieged. Knowing that the group had multiple parties pursuing them, Lord Avery's banner men and their new wives pressed their horses hard the next day. All for not though as a small scouting party found Chance and the party. A battle ensued, during which a signal horn was sent. Sir Hughes swung his sword right before the gnoll breathed air into the horn, but the blow came up short, and the sound echoed through the sea of grass. Within minutes more gnolls swarmed out of nowhere. The fight proved to be brutal for the group. Sir Hughes nearly got his throat ripped out by a hound, and Tim-Tim lost his riding horse and almost lost his consciousness while being swarmed by gnolls and hounds.

Now the group is on the run. Half the party is already out of breath from the quick bit of divine healing the party did after the skirmish. Out of breath, out of time, and nowhere to hide the group is now rushing through the sea of grass hoping to reach the great elven forest of the northwest (that is seriously what it is called!) before the gnolls can track them down.

Wednesday, August 15, 2012

A little Sumpin Sumpin and an Assassin



Lagunitas- A little Sumpin Sumpin Ale

Petaluma Ca
Lagunitas is a fun little brewery just down the road from me in Petaluma. They make a bunch of great beer but until today I had never had A Little Sumpin Sumpin Ale.

Here are my fantasy character inspired notes:

Blond appearance with a nice thick head that had a fair amount of lacing; reminded me of how Stansa clung to Joffery in A Game of Thrones . The nose had a heavy dose of hops and some good funk mixed with citrus, similar to Burrich from Assassin’s Apprentice. Viscosity and body were both medium; neither overwhelmed me, nor did they let me down. The finish came on strong like Regius after Wizards of the Cost launched 3rd edition. All in all I would call it a magnificent brew!

So what to pair with this finely crafted Ale? I had just finished a fun book on vacation but I feel it will fold under the pressure of this hoppy delight. However, since I mentioned Burrich I will go with the Assassin’s Apprentice by Robin Hobb. Published in 1995, this book tells the tale of a royal bastard, bonded to a wolf. No, I’m not talking about John Snow, although sometimes I wonder if Fitz Chivary did not plant the seed for Snow. Fitz weaves through an impressive array of court intrigue, love, and a healthy dose of assassinations while trying to find his place in life.  Hobb does a beautiful job of character development and weaves a very satisfying tale. If you haven’t read this book crack a pint and have a look.
Buy the book here: Assassin's Apprentice
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